by Aaroneous
Really loved Real Estate Games and certainly didn't see this twist coming. Keep writing!
I like the new twist. I liked Janis, but yes, she was a wimp, and an amazingly easy woman: Anyone could have her, and anyone did, even anonymous rapists, about whom she seemed amazingly casual. (Are we ever going to find out who chained her up and fucked her in the middle of the night, and if Mark Seiman set it up?) What if we promise -- scout's honor -- not to tell Janis? By the way, has Mark factored in Officer Flanagan? I see trouble in that direction. Finally, who is Mark's secret enemy, the one he's afraid will kill everyone? Are the Russians involved? 5* ~~ JB
Interesting story I have known many hot hot realtors and most of them swingers. Write a story about Tina in colorado springs with white porsche SUV she is legendary for having sex with customers.