All Comments on 'Reasonable Accommodation'

by SimonDoom

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KeithW66KeithW6612 months ago

what a wonderful imagination you have, and then be able to weave such a great story is amazing.

StrappySandalsStrappySandals12 months ago

Read like a script from "Two and a Half Men". Charlie Sheen the lawyer and Holland Taylor as Maxine. A good lesbian session would have made for a better ending though!!

JBEdwardsJBEdwards12 months ago

This story is a bit of a cartoon. As such, it's not bad. Disney should grab it, make an animated version of it, and then give it to Ron DeSantis for his campaign for president. ~~JB

namidaboshinamidaboshi12 months ago

Where's the rest of the story? We've had 3 pages of prelude and it cut off just when the action was about to kick off.

This is confusing.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Could have been better.

I was hoping for a slow burn, like the story ‘My Hot Mom’, or another creator’s story ‘My Promiscuous Mom’. The premise had promise, but this story has too much fluff, and not enough build-up. And it has action in bursts.

Great premise, poor execution.

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I am a long-time reader of stories on this Site, and I began publishing stories in late 2016. I enjoy a variety of erotic stories, and I hope to publish stories that explore many different aspects of erotica. Comments and constructive criticism are welcome.