All Comments on 'Rebecca and her Brother'

I loved it it was actually good let me know when you have more cause I definitely want to read em all please and thanks 👍

Short and sexy.

Well written and interesting.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Yes Please continue. Great story well written. Sexy taboo erotic intense and descriptive Can’t wait to see what they do next. Thank you very much x

When did commas replace periods in sentence structure? Other than that, it is a fine story.

Not too bad, but needs some work and editing. More build-up.

Can sexy Jacob have a bit of chest hair?

That was one of the most poorly written stories I have read on this site. It seems that you ran out of places to use the word taunt. Get some help with the next one, or just be a reader from now on.

don't like the nigger part 1 star

Find a community college near you, take a couple of writing courses. The content is average but the presentation needs quite a bit of work.

I liked it, Rebecca and Jacob realized that they love each other and they will start their own family together, she will be pregnant many times...

More, please!

The story itself is pretty good. There were a few errors and some weird word choices, but nothing horrendous.

Write more.