All Comments on 'Reboot'

by Surfacing1440

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Splendid.

elleayeareelleayeareover 2 years ago

I cannot remember the last time I was so taken with the story. The banter and tension, 🧑‍🍳😘

clearcreekclearcreekover 2 years ago

ships crossing in the night found themselves at the same port. I especially enjoyed the last bit where Harry said he was late.

Niomi2921Niomi2921over 2 years ago

What a fun one!! Merry Christmas!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Best story ever! Love the last flirting when they get out of the elevator. Clever and fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please keep writing. Your writing is exceptional.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So sweet, so hot, so fundamentally real. You're very talented. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Amazing story. Please write more like this one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Lovely story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please please PLEASE post more. This and the Spy Girl series are my faves. I check frequently to see if you've added any new ones. Your writing is great. A real storyline plus what we're all here for.

kdlucaskdlucasalmost 2 years ago

i just reread this story. It's one of my favs! Thanks for sharing it.

ActingupActingupabout 1 year ago

What a clever story. It’s hard to do something original with an elevator tale but you did it so well - the reboot metaphor, the initially toxic chemistry, the unravelling misunderstanding, and the sweet resolution. Great stuff.

sotarosotaro8 months ago

Nice writing. Great characters.

Sparkly_vibesSparkly_vibes5 months ago

You're so good

I'm mad you only have 5 stories

Spike1969Spike19694 months ago

Very well written!!

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Update as of 8/9/2023 - Looking for The Archer, A Taste of Submission, or Spy Girl? Thanks to an outpouring of reader encouragement, I have decided to self-publish some of my works. "The Archer" by Ruby Rodrigo is available via ebook and paperback on Amazon and is free on Kin...