by T00M
Too bad Ryan doesn't let his chestnut brown hair grow -- maybe for pubes and for sexy chest hair?
The first commenter got it right, "this is as good as it gets". This was very well written. Your description of the feelings of first-time gay sex was excellent. Your telling of having that full body orgasm was spot on. I remember having that as well and even having an out of body experience, floating up and looking down at being fucked. It was a wonderful feeling, but like you it happened once. You were so lucky to have someone as caring as Ryan to be you first lover. I'm looking forward to reading more about the two of you in this ***** plus story. MLF
I have been reading stories on this site for many years, and this is one of my favorites. You are a better writer than you think: convincing, well paced and powerfully sexy. It makes me want to get up and find a man with a big hot cock to fuck me over and over again. Please keep writing.
Beautiful. I just wanted to add that I have never before encountered a description of a full-body orgasm on this site. I have had a few and you captured it very accurately.
Wow, it's as you are me! Almost precisely my experience! Such a hot fucking story. You are good, man!
Beautifully written, man! The build up was so intense and well-paced. I especially liked a few moments when you felt as if you had some control.Curious to see if that will develop in future chapters.