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ScottishTexanScottishTexan5 months ago

Excellent ending! I certainly didn’t see THAT ONE coming! (No puns intended)

I doubt that you have ideas on a part 2 for this, but should you decide to write one then I'll race for my tablet to read it. 😉 5/5

RomanceLivesRomanceLives5 months ago

Good story. ****

At the top of the last page I noticed the title, Recorded for Posterity, so I was wondering how that would come about. Oops!

BTW there were a few spots where I lost track of who was speaking or who was doing what. Too many 'she' and 'her' in a row.

Sex_CrazedSex_Crazed5 months ago

I hope it all works out for them

XactoXacto5 months ago

Oooops! 😂😂😂

DrizdartDrizdart5 months ago

5 stars just for the final three paragraphs.

The lead-up to that was fine. but the ending .... that came from nowhere and created a fascinating set of questions.

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