by shakna
Excellent ending! I certainly didn’t see THAT ONE coming! (No puns intended)
I doubt that you have ideas on a part 2 for this, but should you decide to write one then I'll race for my tablet to read it. 😉 5/5
Good story. ****
At the top of the last page I noticed the title, Recorded for Posterity, so I was wondering how that would come about. Oops!
BTW there were a few spots where I lost track of who was speaking or who was doing what. Too many 'she' and 'her' in a row.
5 stars just for the final three paragraphs.
The lead-up to that was fine. but the ending .... that came from nowhere and created a fascinating set of questions.