All Comments on 'Recovery of a Hero Ch. 06'

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DesertPirateDesertPiratealmost 16 years ago
Very good!

I really like this story and look forward to more! This chapter starts to show how bad Child Protective services really is in most states. Have fun Bug and keep up the good work!

bruce22bruce22almost 16 years ago
Lots of fun

But unbelievable in terms of too many plot tricks. But I am

enjoying it while suspending analysis. One question though, how did the woman know about the medical situation of Uncle Dar? Then there is the question of the oil on the diving board. Finally where the "twins" parents murdered? As my title says, lots of fun!

BrettCanonBrettCanonalmost 16 years ago
EXCELLENT STORY

This is an excellent story and am really enjoying it.

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