All Comments on 'Recovery of a Hero Ch. 14'

I loved the story and Dar is so lucky to have met such great friends.

Love the story but don't like having to re-read sentences over again to grasp the full meaning when there are so many grammatical errors.

Please get a good proofreader that understands the English language.

"your" and "you're" are different words with different meanings.

Loose and lose are different also.

There are many others but I am too old and tired to add them now.

Oh yes, that reminds me; "too", "to" and "two" should be learned also.

Please continue to write. You have much to contribute to literature.

Thanks,

deJay_13 (dlj13@bellsouth.net)

PS: Just couldn't resist. "out" and "ought" are not interchangeable.

"yea" and "yeah" are also not interchangeable.

If you are going to give "Special thanks to DesertPirate for his assitance," he might appreciate it more if you spelled "assistance" correctly.