All Comments on 'Red'

Good character development, intriguing plot development. Well-written. Makes me eager to read future chapters. Champagne is correct spelling. Could use minor proof reading best done by someone other than the author. Authors see what they meant to write, not what they wrote.

Good start. Looking forward to the future chapters.

Fucking fantastic.....more chapters please, leaves me wanting more!!!

CHAMPAGNE!

I very interesting and hot start

Look forward to reading more of Reds adventures.

The sex scenes were hot especially the photo shoot, not keen on the adulterous behavior without consent, but a pretty solid start.

Lucky guy. She is definitely not like my TA who taught Photography in school.

Good beginning!

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Don't waste your time if you're not into situations where the father cuckolds his son and the son likes it.