by GeorgieH
How could this not be a well told (and probably true) story. The pace, the word choice, the honesty, all tell the reader this actually happened. And, like so many of life's seminal moments, it informed.
Well done...
Full of blather and irritating flightiness. The author takes you round in circles and bores you silly before you’re one quarter of the way through the story.
A shallow mind might call this boring. It does not have the detailed erotica so many readers are seeking.
But this is very nearly poetic and is more involved with the mental sensations even as it describes the physical.
You can be pleased with yourself about this effort.
All fathers and daughters should experience such uninhabited love.
Anon 3 is a moron. While I would have like a bit more detail, and was hoping he would have slipped her a tickle pickle, this a well written story. It was well developed, and though I doubt the veracity of any story here, including the one purportedly true, this one made you believe it very well COULD be true. Five solid stars.
I found this story a compelling and deeply arousing read, and a beautiful insight into the father-daughter relationship. So well written it is a convincing story. Loved it!
Thanks for this magical story. She is a gift.
And she immediately reminded me of Nabokov's Lolita. In the erotic portrayal of the evening. So tender and delicate. I am very happy that I found all of your stories.
English is not my mother tongue. German.
It is a great pleasure to follow your excellent descriptions and to enjoy them. Your English is very complex and wordy. While understanding everything is a lot more work for me, it is well worth the effort. Your humor is wonderful.