by HeyAll
Loved it, I think you made a mistake when you mentioned the internet btw
I like stories with hero endings, for me this beautiful story is missing the Oscar 😊 , but I loved it…great writing talent
"Will you be here?"
"Maybe, maybe not."
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The questioning look disappears. Feeling alive and vibrant, with new confidence and energy flooding her mind, spirit and body she decides it wasn't a question. A cloud darkens her eyes. With an emphatic downward tilt of her head, she tells Heather. "Be here!"
Just an observation - if a pool is going to be used then it is easier - and cheaper - to keep it heated than starting from room temperature everyday. Other than that, excellent.
So erotically descriptive, I have some extra lip gloss for both Sienna and Heather. Might just have to use it myself, mmmm...
Five stars, plus the one's I saw after finishing....
In keeping with your show biz theme: Bravo! Encore! A well written story with a great plot. Surely you can add to this, either with Sienna and/or Heather or perhaps new characters. You know, like in True Detective or American Horror Story. Please give us more.
Very well written story, you seem to have a good knowledge of the film world.
Great story and very sexy.
Thank you for sharing!
Well done! Only negative, the ending seemed abrupt to me. Seemed doesn't necessarily mean it was.
This so good! A great story to read!
More of it too please;)
L