All Comments on 'Red Lipstick Princess'

But once the words got written the sex was more like a bullet train than erotic.

Too fast. No buildup. No foreplay. He admitted he wanted to see them, why didn't she ask him what he'd like to do to/with them? Why didn't she tell him how sensitive they were, and what she'd like to do to him with them?

Why no pussy play? Why no ass play? Why no discussion about whether he'd ever fucked an ass, and would he like to fuck hers?

So many opportunities to be erotic, but the aim seemed to be how fast sex gets done over.

Gave it three stars.