All Comments on 'Red Notice Ch. 18'

Glad your back with this 5 Star story that has wonderful characters and well developed storytelling. Like that Cherry is next on the hot list. This whole sexual adventure is very entertaining and look forward to many more chapters of erotic drama. Thanks for your time to develop and publish. Cheers

A really great part of a real great story. Your storys always feature a great character development and a great visual description. I only would wish for more of the interesting sexual parts - more detail and more in quantity. That's something I REALLY miss in your stories and would make them SO MUCH better.

Can't wait for Cherry, but will. This story is an excellent example of blending content and form into a cohesive package. All those brats complaining about the pacing or the lack of action just needs 5 more chapters of build-up, methinks :)

I think that IF she properly spanks Cherry then it will help her get through her doubts and insecurities.

It will be fascinating to read how the relationship between Cherry and Kelly progresses. Another spanking for Kelly to even it up? Will Kelly become Cherry's girl afterwards? Will she fail in the spanking and end up naked next to Cherry as Elsworth spanks them both? Endless possibilities!