All Comments on 'Red Ribbons and Scripture'

Confused.....26 26 36???

I presume that there will be a Chapter 2?

The story seems unfinished.

Sure hope there is more .:. Very odd ending if this is all

There will be more to the story.

4 1/2 * from me. I’ll round that up to 5! I enjoyed reading the story very much.

I do wish that you had edited it a bit more carefully. In particular, your style of writing dialogue slows down my reading and leaves me shaking my head a bit. I find it easier to read if each speaker has a new paragraph and the quotation marks clearly define what is being said.

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

I second what Davester said. Nearly impossible to follow the dialog and time a new person speaks, a new paragraph needs to be used. There were also times when the story switched from past tense to current tense. Disturbing. I strongly recommend an editor.

The story is very disjointed, and it is often unclear who is the speaker. Several times I had to re-read a paragraph trying to figure out who was talking.

An excellent story in every way!!

This is a moving story of romance, drama, and faith, brought together beautifully by the author. One of the very few stories on the site that does not denigrate religious faith while at the same time having erotic elements. Five stars.