All Comments on 'Red Rock'

The story was fairly well written, but the villains of the piece got off too easily. The pay off in a story like this is for the rapists and sadists to die as slowly and torturously as those they prey on. In that respect the story is a failure. Tibbs, Loomis and the rest got off way too easily. It also says volumes about the author that every rape victim climaxed while being dominated and abused. That almost never happens. I still gave the story 5 stars because here, among primarily amateur writers, the storytelling was a cut above, but understand that the bar is set relatively low.

After two gross historical errors within the first three paragraphs, I stopped reading and gave it a generous one star. Hawks do not eat carrion, vultures do! Winchester made the 44-40 cartridge, not Colt and it was used in long guns and saddle carbines rather than revolvers.

And then you must have gone on a crack smoking Binger with all of your perverted rape crap and a horrible unfinished ending. You might want to seek professional mental health help, Stat. 1 Star and a total waste of time.