All Comments on 'Red Roses'

I can't wait to read more.

please continue

Can we have another part to it? Love love love it!!

I really enjoyed this story. I hope you continue to add to it.

Hey, i really liked the story, can you please continue? Pleeease!

One of the best submissions I’ve ever read

Please continue the story

I don't know how you can top this story, but I hope you'll try.

One of the best I’ve ever read. Loved the build up and tension and ESPECIALLY loved the rape scene. Great characters...I want to know more about Justin...What happens next?? Please continue this...Part 2??

This was amazing! I’d love to read more!

Holy fuck!

Please tell me there will be a second chapter!

Amazing story

Please keep them coming. This was one of the best stories I've ever read.

Its one of the best written story i have ever read. Please do not end this abruptly....

There was actually very little erotic about the story, and not just because how businesslike the whole agreement and the aftermath mostly was (the sex scene itself is well written, and some parts of the fallout I liked), but there was something else, something that was really bothering me about the whole thing. It wasn't until I reached the end that I realized what it was.

This isn't really about a fantasy, nor about romance, not even about lust. This was about someone clearly having realized that her friend had feelings for her and using that to her advantage to well... Use him, and messes him up for a long time. Six months here, but I know it can take a lot longer to recover, I've been through it. No, not a rape fantasy, but a very imbalanced pseudo-relationship that was all take and no give, because this is what this was, everything for her and on her terms and he gets... Nothing. Because no, "he gets to have sex with her" is not really anything in such an arrangement because, as shocking as it might be, "men are pigs" (which is the half-assed explanation here) is not only false, but entirely asinine (ftm, I wish I had never had sex with that person). And he ultimately realized anyway that he wouldn't have cared not to have sex with her, belying the story's own justification.

The writing is great, though, and I actually would have liked the story as the story of a friend being taken advantage of another... If he had realized it, if he had sent the "I'm out" card after all. It would have been the one decision he made for himself and not for her.

I've read noncon stories with far worse acts, but that's the thing; the story never pretends they aren't wrong. In contrast, there was nothing illegal in this story, but there was plenty wrong, yet the story still tries to show everything as alright. Maybe that was the biggest problem ultimately.

It brings to mind another story I read here ("let's make a deal", specially part two, a gay male story), where the protagonist realizes the physical—at the moment—relationship they're entering is one where he will be used, and he immediately protests.

Really well written, incredible CNC. The sex was incredibly hot, and the relationship had just the right amount of tension. I loved that they were best friends and that there was a hint that there might be more between them after that experience.

I enjoyed this story immensely! Keep up the great work

I would love more of Trish and Justin! I enjoyed this story so much. Both the plot and sex were fire!

This is superb.

This was a great read. Would love to be in Trish's position.

Well written, look forward to more.

This was incredible, one of the most exciting non-consent stories I've ever read. Both the set-up and the sex were so fucking hot. I hope you keep writing these fantasies, because I want more. xo

The only downside is that it ended before the second encounter. Looking forward to reading more.

This story was simply incredible, the build up and pay off were perfection. I would love to read a part 2 or another similar story. Thank you!

You are talented. Incredibly hot...you definitely brought the heat...and well written. Looking forward to whatever you write next.

This was an amazingly well written story. I can actually see something like this actually happening, and im kinda wanting them to expand their relationship myself

Every time I find a story so hot and written so well I can’t wait to finish to look at the author’s body of work on Literotica. Now I’m super disappointed that there is no more material of yours to read on here, but I’m excited for finding a new favorite content creator. Please continue writing, different stories or a sequel to this one you’ll have tons of fans. Great work!

Btw red rose white rose. Thought the story would be about Yorkshire and Lancashire.

Great story!

5

I love it! This is well thought-out and well written.

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

I'm actually jealous of your characters! I think this story will really resonate with many readers.

Well thought out! Could really get behind this story and it definitely hits my own fantasies. Love the idea that they kept everything separate and kept the fantasy preserved! Well done!

I enjoyed your story immensly. I've had a rape fantasy forever and i loved how you put both perspectives in your story ... her embarrassment to admit it and his reluctance to fulfill it for her. Worrying about the effect it will have on the relationship because there really is no going back after that. Having some one you care about do this to you or doing it to someone you care about can be a slippery slope.

I thought your writing was awesome. How you gave the background on the characters and then got into it. Some stories are okay to just get right into the sex but this one I think was well-served by the development of the characters and their story. And you gave me some ideas towards fulfilling my own fantasy. :)

I hope you continue writing and look forward to more stories from you.

Well done!

These kind of stories normally aren't my bag. The title and the blurb grabbed my attention, however, so I decided to give it a whirl, and I'm glad I did.

It wasn't just the sex that did it for me (although stars and garters, it was amazing), it was the interactions between Trish and Justin, before, during and after. Seeing the reluctance on BOTH sides was a great touch. Most guys would probably have thought "alright, time to smash that tight bod" but even during the act Justin was considerate of his friend/partner, making sure they were still into it even when he was having second thoughts. I particularly enjoyed the last "wipe yourself off" moment to end the fantasy. I thought it was a nice touch that didn't break the scenario.

You're a fantastic writing with a knack for the gripping, and I can't wait to see what else you pen in the future. Good luck with your writing!

Do not like rape at all but what a great story I have fun twice reading it. I am a sissy male and would now like to be raped like this.

This was fantastic thank you for sharing :)

Excellent story. You certainly check all the boxes on what makes a great Literotica tale. Well done. Be sure to enter some of the contests if you haven’t. You’re sure to win. This one would be a winner if it hasn’t won something already.

Well written, but not the right category in my opinion. Nothing non con about it.

There are very few people in my life I would allow to be a "Justin" for my one night of being "Trish." The creativity is fab and the tension built up is amazing. I have to admit feeling like Trish did, deviant and like there is something wrong with me. But with a trusted friend. I wouldn't mind my night. I wish I had a "Justin" nearby.

Great plot and story line. Excellent grammar. Enjoyed it very much. Please write more.

That was awesome, good job!

Sensational!

I disagree on the category. This definitely illustrates reluctance and the category is non consensual/reluctance.

Great read!

Very well written, awesome story. Looking forward to seeing more from you!!

White hot!

I'd never consider raping a woman--the penalties and the guilt would overwhelm me--and I can't imagine a woman who'd have a rape fantasy. However, as incongruous as it seems, this is one hot story.

Now excuse me, because I have to read Chapter 2 to learn what happened next.

Wow, I loved this! Thank you so much for sharing this.

I enjoyed this way too much. I do think their friendship is over though. They’ll either end up dating or the hurt will be too much and they’ll fade away from each other’s lives. In terms of fantasy though,awesome. Wish I had a friend I trusted enough for such an experience.

As a married woman I always feel guilty looking for stories about rape fantasies but this truly made me feel like I could enjoy the fantasy and story. Your writing and editing is great and manages to avoid most of what I consider to be cringey descriptions. I also love the very real elements of reluctance portrayed in the story and the build up to it all.

Thank you for sharing.

Just WOW!!!!!

Originally, I was about to click out as I have zero tolerance for rape but your story arc made it clear that was not the case, so i read on. I'm just starting this series as I saw the LW chapter (my usual stomping ground), bringing me back to the original "reluctance" genre story. (Again, as a father of four daughters I avoid those stories.) We'll see how the story arc evolves but you've done a brilliant job of creating two characters that have an almost sibling bond, yet realize they aren't. The ideal mate would be your best friend in an ideal world. If only that world existed.... 5*

Rape is about as fanciful as starvation, terminal illness, Russian Roulette. Remember the movie about the group that executed real automobile accidents for the sexual arousal?

This story trivializes a common human catastrophe. Why not use the near drowning death of a child as a sexual stimulant? All these behavior are symptoms of mental dysfunction. Once this crazy bitch gets saturated and satisfied with planned limited rapes, she's going to go out at the wrong times of night to the wrong parts of town to troll for a "real" rape experience. What is really sad and sick is that she will risk disease, permanent disfigurement or death, and she might Love it. I can see the toilet bowl of her mental state swirling down the drain.

Just pathetic and wrong. Certainly not to be celebrated. Shame on you.

To the anon below me, the only insane person here is you.

What are you even raving about? You read a fictional story clearly categorized in the Non-Consent section of a porn site and you blabber psuedo-psychological moralistic babble. You're a fucking stupid hypocrite. If you really want to preach, you shouldn't be on a porn site. If you hate non-consent stories, you shouldn't have read one.

Your other point is so ignorant, it's sad. If you think any woman is going to go out looking to get really raped, you know nothing about women. Nothing. Zilch. Nada. Some women can have ravishment fantasies about a guy they deeply trust and like a.k.a her close friend, her boyfriend or her husband. No woman will ever go looking for real rape by strangers who could murder her or mutilate her so badly she'd wish she was mercifully murdered. Only a complete idiot of a man would ever think any woman would go out hunting for real rape.

Equating ravishment fantasies to child murder is disgusting, disingenuous and totally irrational. Get the fuck out of here with that stupid bullshit. Repeated studies have shown that the majority women have had ravishment fantasies. The number is put between 50% and 80%. A study by UCLA pegs the number at 64%. Look it up yourself since you apparently care so much. Most women have ravishment fantasies. Are you saying all those women might as well go kill some kids? Get the fuck out of here with that stupid bullshit.

You're hypocritical, clueless and illogical.

Shame on you.

I gave this story a deserved 5*.

Bat-shit crazy premise, of course, but given that it’s a very good—and very erotic—story.

As previously mentioned, rape fantasy is the most common fantasy among women. Author found a way to write it while keeping it taboo and making the characters uncomfortable with it, but still acting it out. Frankly, most of what I've read on this website is poorly written trash. Damn good first submission, you clearly have a future in writing.

Fucking Brilliant!!!!!!! Amazing plot and writing skills. Chapter 2?

Funny, realistic, and well resonated with me. I really really love the friendship and caring between both characters. It is sooo mentally stimulating and well done!

Well told, and very well written. I like that you have well-established 'rules of engagement' and take the time to convey the importance of friendship and trust between the characters. The action is five-alarm fire hot!

Excellent story. Thanks for writing it.

As a woman with a rape fantasy, I had high hopes for this story. It was a disappointment. Justin's character was too weak and compliant. He never breaks the rules or wins the upper hand. I understand why the rules are there but his lack of control over the situation defeats the purpose of the fantasy. That's the nice guy a girl ends up marrying... not the dirty fantasy she comes to literotica to read.

I had a best friend like that...it was a wonderful experience!!

This was one of the most bizarre stories I've ever read.

Trish needs some serious therapy - she's in love with him, but won't admit it. Hope she can get her demons excised.

Well crafted, interesting plot. I'm not really into rape fantasy, but this sets the stage for development of a romance and further character development. Looking forward to the rest of the series.

Love the way you did consensual non-consent!! Some non consent stories make me feel icky even tho i like the genre so it’s tuff but this one was all very respectful of boundaries which allowed me to enjoy the fantasy much more.

It was perfect.

Really, really well done. Nothing else to be said.

LWlurker

This perfectly filled the niche i was looking for. I have struggled with a "rape fantasy" and the guilt surrounding that, especially given that and erotica that actually gets into that real is too uncomfortable for me. But this perfectly explains how I think about and feel about the intruder role play, so well done. Also incredibly hot!

I imagine that there are a lot of people like me, who gravitate to non-con despite ourselves, but don't like actual rape. It can be tricky to find something that is erotically stimulating but don't make you feel gross once all the good chemicals fade. It's even harder to set a good non-con story in contemporary times, because you bring in all the current sexual norms (which I quite approve of in real life) as well as making the story more real feeling. You've done such an amazing job of threading that needle. I really also love how you've captured the reluctance of the dominant partner--how our sexual desires can be at war with our broader desires and emotions. Really great writing.

Probably the best CNC story I’ve read.

It addresses the guilty nature from both the man’s perspective and the woman through her letter to him.

Completely hot, controlled and played right into my fantasies.

I have really enjoyed this series. I'm on Ch. 4 now and have come back to comment. This was my favorite so far, but every chapter is very well written. Descriptions are eloquent and not repetitive. The chemistry between your characters is sweet, beautiful and blistering, all at once. I appreciate the commitment and love between characters, especially in a non-consent/reluctance story. This goes down as a favorite!

Really good writing, although very little sex. It went from a 5 to a 4 because of all the filler. IMHO, it would have been sexier to talk about her kinky desires, than go the US mail route. You end up reading in your own emphasis of the words sent. Half the fun of having sex with each other is talking about it.