All Comments on 'Red Silk'

This is a hot story in itself, but I feel it is limited by a couple of things:

1. the role of the party, the context of the party, is not well developed. The couple may as well have gone to a motel to have sex.

2. the use of "he" and "her" instead of specific names makes the participants come across as anonymous, generic stick figures, almost like the early days of computerized animation. You don't have to go to the extreme that some authors do of describing every curve of their body, but giving them a name at least develops more mental involvement by the reader.