All Comments on 'Red Vinyl Ch. 01'

Great to see you writing again! Looking forward to Lily’s journey.

When I saw your username I smiled. Not just because it was nice to see you post on Literotica but more so because I knew that I was in for a reading/immersive experience. You have a way of weaving words into tangible feelings so easily visualized/felt — so often just a few words. One example among many come to mind: “Ashes have a way of sticking to everything.” So true in reality, so true metaphorically. And once again the creation of flawed, believably real characters within a psychologically captivating storyline. Thanks for sharing; could not have been easy to craft — or maybe it was. Almost felt like it poured out. So looking forward.

Oh this will be slow.

I'm looking forward to where this journey takes us.

A very deft piece of writing conveying a deep sense of sadness and longing. It promises to be a harrowing journey but, I think, a worthwhile one. Five stars.

It is scary how well you write about pain. I will cry a little tonight, but tears are good, they wash away the pain.

Welcome back. An intriguing beginning to what promises to be a intricate storyline.

Because you are the train's engineer, I'm coming along for the ride, wherever you take us. I trust you. Having said that, this is already a hard ride, with a few trigger elements that resonate for me, not so much in terms of my own life experiences, but because of my best friend's life story. So I am scared but hopeful for Lily, but scared....really scared. Amj glad you're back for this. Missed you.

OMG …… childhood and parenting …… if a horror show can play a dirty game, it starts in the childhood, and develops quite easily into the adult times ….. destroying a kids soul is perversion …… tears welling up and i feel so drained, yes my demons are online …… wonderfully written …… thank tou for sharing

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So unlike your other work ... It's ... darker, making me feel, like sensing and probing into the story. The wonderful stream-of-consciousness, flowing from the first page grabbed me, and the developments after that leave me uncomfortable, ill at ease. I look forward to the next episode, but with some trepidation.

Intriguing opening. ❤️

well done looking forward to more be well a fan shayne