All Comments on 'Redhead Aidan Crashes the Auction'

Great build up and character intro. Needed a prof read but nothing to bad. Should have made this part one and then went on in part to to their growing relationship before the finish which seemed rushed. Otherwise bravo

But I am like Dragonsbain.... great build up and character definition, but ended a bit too fast... typo's happen..... minor detail..... otherwise should be a winner!!!!

But nice treatment. Who cares about typos, not everyone has the time to be a "perfucktionist," except the critics, God Bless their pointed heads.

Really liked that you managed to pull everything together to make a solid, complete, story.

Sweet and complete. If you ever feel like writing more, the further adventures if Aidan and Dr. Jim could make good reading.

If not, it's a close second. An interesting premise followed up with a sexy ending is always a good recipe for a great story like this one.

Good luck in the contest.

IT WAS, IN POINT OF FACT, A WONDERFUL STORY. IT CANNOT BE ADEQUATELY DESCRIBED WITH ANY ONE OF A GROUP OF SUPERLATIVES. TO HAVE A NAIVE, YET BEAUTIFUL, 19-YEAR-OLD MEET HER DESTINY IN SUCH A SERENDIPITOUS CHAIN OF EVENTS IS A STORY THAT CRIED OUT TO BE WRITTEN. THANK YOU FOR THIS GREAT WORK OF ART. A RATING SYSTEM THAT STOPS AT 5 IS INDEED A SHAME. PLEASE CONTINUE TO REWARD YOUR READERS WITH SIMILAR CREATIONS.

Sorry but childish & corny.

But the Headline for you is: WRITE WHAT YOU KNOW.

I suggest you go on to write other stories. Not rewrite this one.

Too much lining up the parts...without the characters being credible.

Details rarely interesting or believable.

Your other writings on here are very promising.

I can understand some people negative comments, But I'm a sucker for sweet

stories.

A tender story, but...

Great story, very creative- wonderful conclusion. I really enjoy your writing, I think you are very creative and insightful in developing your characters which gives them a lot of depth. Wonderful story!

Loved it. Sweet and light but also sexy. Five stars for cuteness factor.

Wonderful story, redheads rule!