All Comments on 'Redheads Waiting'

Honestly, my favorite parts were the actual "mom" bits included in the subliminal messages. Don't get me wrong, the story was hot--I absolutely will fap to this again--but every time, they made me smile. Except when they made me laugh out loud.

I love the twist at the end.

Very entertaining story, my only observation is that Joanna's story goes from getting off once a week in Chapter 1 to being a nymphomaniac from the beginning in Chapter 4. It's not a deal breaker for me, I thought it interrupted the flow of the story though.

* 5 * Incredible... !!

I have a feeling I've read this story before. Hmmm....

I really enjoyed this as it was a well built up story.

I got a solid chuckle out of the last entry

Is this a rewrite or republished? It seems as though I read this a couple years ago.

Pappasleaze!

A totally depraved family! I love it! 5 stars. I wonder how long it will take for the girls' husbands to buy into the family dynamic. Will the husbands have Joshua first or vice versa? Whose cock will be up whose ass while some other fucking is going on? Three men and three women. - who will do whom? And who's next? LOL

That was really fkn hot ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

@Fatdog: That's deliberate! By the end of the story it should make more sense.

@namidaboshi: Yeah I originally uploaded it in like a million parts. Took all my stories down and I'm reuploading them as single units.

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I find that the sudden reveal that the, until then, oblivious Dad is actually the mastermind seemingly just to add a man into the equation a negative. Woulda been a 5 star rating otherwise.

I always love how subtle your stories are about the corruption. It was obvious the first time I read this that the husband was behind the changes through the small details you snuck in. You have a way with leaving things unspoken that I really enjoy. I can't wait for more of your work to be rewritten.

Great story and I especially enjoyed the final reveal of Dad's being the director of all the action all along! As always a very well thought out and written story. I definitely enjoy your writing style and the timing and methodology of your sensuality in your storylines. Thank you for sharing your erotic visions and literary talents.