by Samuelx
sick and tired of seeing your prolific, misogynist, racist, fascist posts do everyone a favor and quit writing you sick f***.
We all know that muhammad was a pedophile.
Our country must exterminate all bastard muslims mercilessly
I like the story, it's an interesting topic. I also like that you didn't give him a huge cock as so many other writers do.
But why this big jump ? They leave her family's house. and in the next chapter she is married and has 2 sons. The marriage and pregnancies could have been in a second chapter. You didn't mention a headscarf, does she wear one ?
Why not develop this story further, religion and interracial sex a good mix.
Im not sure how your twisted mind thinks something like this could happen. What drugs are you on?