All Comments on 'Reformation Ch. 01'

Like the story but you picked a very wierd place to leave it at.....would have rated it higher but I'm not sure where you're headed with this one. Just didnt seem to fit in right.

Please continue this. Big Changes At Home was so great. I wish other authors would take this approach when they finish a great series.

I hope Richard cancelled all the insurance policies, spent all of the money, burned all the cash, and left them all penniless. I hope the next chapters have evil, nasty things happening to the remaining characters, especially Owen. I won't know because I will not read them, so, whatever... I'm glad I didn't waste my time reading the previous series. Your writing is excellent, but the story sucks wind. Major downer. Pet peeve with this site: re-vamp classification system so readers can be forewarned that stories are depressing. Readers who would rather not read that sort of thing can then opt out...

I didn't expect this. You really know how to keep your readers interested.

Gave up hope instead of Standing up to his Family which he put in the Position they find themselves in a Coward from Beginning to End.

man you did not like Richard.

I love the sequences with Taryn and Rosina regarding Rosina's growing passion to suck her mothers nipples. I would love to see her (Rosina) develop a true obsession with her mothers nipples, something that Owen can fully exploit and Taryn possibly finding that the constant suckling of her nipples makes her lactate and/or simply desire passionately, the hard and loving use of her nipples. Talk about reformation!!!!

Sweet move kid.

I know these stories are old--this added a twist to the story--especially since the father had cheated for ten years like it was no big deal--and to see him be so vengeful at the end--yet how can he be able to have his sons credit cards shut off as well as the phone. At 25 you already have your own job--finances and everything after college

Not how I would've done it, but dang that was epic. Looking forqward to see much Ruchard really messed with them