by GenGdreams
Jenny’s tale has a lot of potential — could be so much more captivating if storyline were developed a bit more. For example, the reader really doesn’t experience the pain/heartbreak of the breakup between Deanna and Jenny; we could stand to better understand the relationship between Regina and Jenny that leads to their love making. That said, looking forward to learning more about Jenny and those around her.
Thank you! I've spent too long away from my writing. I need to get the feel back!