by Gweall
Wonderful, cute, sweet, funny.....I loved it. Although the mother needs a slap in the face, wonderful characters and excellent story. What are the chances of another chapter??? Cheers :D
I loved it...but can you have the crazy mother have an unforseen accident. ;'p
Anyway...Keep'em coming and once again I loved it.
Loved it!!! Glad he got what he needed to make him complete. I just loved it! This is a fav of mine :)
I'm happy that Zo's happy, but I agree with previous comments. The mother need a big slice of humble pie from an... accident
I was so sure the whole love thing would go down the drain due to the ending of the other one but they survived well lol.
Nice one and thanks for sharing your stories with us :)
Loved the story and it was fantastic that you had created the atmosphere that it just might NOT work out. However, :)
Loved it yet again..!!
This story got my intreast for some reason and i loved it..:)
Will keep reading more of ur stories..!!
Keep writing
Shiv
enjoyed that zo could get what he wanted to make him happy and that mick would do it for his happiness