by TabooTeller
This one is great and noone is screwing around. The sex is really hot, too.
Imagine--Hot sex between a husband and wife. What next?
Whether a sequel or a new story it will be welcome!!!
When you write stories like this:
Keep 'em coming TT.
A great story about temptation, love and respect because whether stated or not, love and respect works us through the temptation.
Perfect! It doesn't get any better than this! This is a story to be read over and over! The sex was outstanding! And the premise and story line were just great! This category needs more stories like this one! It was truly enjoyed! If you do a sequel I hope it's as good or better than this story!
Thank you!
Sexmate
The story itself was fine. You could use an editor to catch the misspellings and words out of place. Those kind of took me out of the story a couple of times, just when it was getting good.
Wow, actually a story of a wife who is proactive in bringing the flame back!!! Amazing and fun read!!!
Yeah, get a good spell checker and editor to help. That would help a lot!!
Awesome story... It was nice that they BOTH came close to cheating but then, reality set in and they backed off, and made the right choice... Each other... I know this is old but I would love to see a sequel, as long as(like you said) they are faithful... Maybe some more outside sex, or sex at work for them??
one of the great things about having a loving wife for many years is the great sex. the kind of sex that leaves you spent and unable to move. the kind of sex that says I LOVE you and only you will ever experience this with me. there is no me in this type of sex there is only US. thank you for describing the type of sex that happens when you come out of the "valley". THANK YOU
And it is almost certainly one most f us relate to -=
It would be nice if most of us could say we ended as strong as they did - with no complete fails -
Too many problems with both. Was a real bother when reading. Maybe some can skip over these errors. It ruins the story for me.
Word choice should be severely improved.
Jonny and Richard didn't want to get into her knickers as there was no point she wasn't wearing any they just wanted a bit of her pussy, how disappointed they were when she was exclusive to her husband, So the pussy hounds would have to get over there disappointment.
It could have been a great story if your editor knew the difference between than and then, your and you're, or shuttered and shuddered. A better understanding of punctuation would have made the story more easily read.
detroitdave
If my "wife" ever did something like that I would kick her out and divorce her. But you resident loosers like it of-course.