All Comments on 'Rekindle'

Good story, nice pace, needs an ending.

So deserves a second chapter. Need to know that Laura and Ben live happily ever after.

Very very good read. Good development, believable plot erotic sex scenes. A few minor grammar errors. ie he ' thrusted into her'? If they were in the missionary position how did her toes leave marks on his back? Very minor stuff. I agree with the others. Another chapter is a must.

3 stars

DragonRider55

Really liked the story but I'd love a 2nd chapter to find out what happens in the end. How do they break it to their family? Does he move to be near her? Does she move to be near him? Give us their happily ever after please?

wow for real this definitely needs at a minimum one more chapter please so we can see how they turn out. this is a great story

that i've ever read

legal in quite a few states. Just have to convince her parents, who already know their feelings. Not such a stretch. Let's see it in writing!

I’ll admit I wasn’t a big fan of the protagonist at the beginning, but he was certainly redeeming himself at the end. Hopefully the wider family is accepting of the two, even if they’re initially not. And to echo the others, a second part would be nice.

After all, there are states where their love isn’t a crime, so they can’t be denied their happily ever after if they try hard enough. Cheers, mate!

and beautiful love story! Also damned hot and sexy! Loved every word!

after the opening sentences. what kind of jerk would fuck a friends girl? A WHORE SCUM OF THE EARTH piece of shit. so this story CANNOT be a love story with a sorry assed guy like that. he will cheat on ANY woman he ever gets with, guaranteed.

We need more!

Cheater, 1 star!!