by HelloSir1717
It’s a good story, you’d benefit from an editor or spellchecker. An interesting power play towards the end there.
Tess (UK)
I agree with Tess that you should have someone proofread your story, but the idea, development and pace were all excellent. Thanks for writing. Please write more.
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