by Alex De Kok
A very good job of building up to the climax.
Well done.
I liked it. My only reservation is that Judy seemed to be abnormally mature for her age, even in the universe of erotic fiction. This nagged a little at the credibility.
The continuation from the previous two stories was smoothly done, and the tale well written and enjoyable.
Looking forward to more.
great characters and good plot just the right amount of build up great read."jakk"
You have an excellent way with your characters, and you mkae your narrative fun and readable. Truly enjoyable, and not bad erotica to boot!
lost some continuity. I always enjoy teen stories, but somehow these kids knew too much or were too forward, too openly eager - not sure how to say it. Maybe I never quite had this experience of being so open and having a girl push the action. I did have a couple girls that truly initiated the action but didn't continue to push it. So, I can't relate to this scene, but I can enjoy it...and I did. Thanks.