by amber_now26
You have a gift. The story was exceptionally well written with good grammar and an excellent style.
Hmmmm You've Told Such A Sweet Firts Lesbian Love Story.
Have You Tried To Find / Reconnect With Karen Since She Went Out East To College ?
Thank You For Sharing Such A Lovely 'n Sweet Story
Kisses
Kathy
This story puts most so-called erotic writing to shame. Amazing!
Thank you for sharing your work and life with us! You have a wonderful ability for writing. As others have said before, a great blend of real human emotion and eroticism that lets everyone love this story! A MWM, with lesbian friends, you have the ability to show how much all of us are like each other in our needs for love. revrnd09@yahoo.com
Of course this story was really hot, and yes, I'm going to go upstairs and have a nice cock-stroking session while I think about it some more. But first I want to tell you how much I liked your voice. You're a real writer, and someone I imagine I'd actually like to meet, if the world were arranged that way (I don't pursue online relationships, for many reasons). Thanks very much for sharing this.
I am a straight, middle-aged, married man, and I have read hundreds of lesbian stories on this site. This story is, by far, the most believable, tender, moving story I have ever read here ... and that is saying a lot! Your story didn't just arouse me, it MOVED me. What a wonderful gift you have given your readers by sharing this personal tale with us. Your writing is simultaneously humorous, poignant, and so visually descriptive ... I felt like I was in the room with you, watching every gentle move. Bravo! They say "write what you know". Well, my dear, you have done a fabulous job at that!
Like being a 'bug on the wall' or finding a secret diary. Very well written and totally believable. I don't ever fault women loving women.....I love 'em too!!