by GeorgeDaBuilder
...even though both her and hubbie are cheaters...the scenes are nicely written, the two main characters endearing. It would behoove you to get an editor to correct a few, not many, errors. Keep it up; I'm looking forwrd to the conclusion (hubbie etc...) LeFrog08
But that's okay. I hope to read, more. Excellent work.
I read this series after finding Everybody Needs a Hobby, and initially thought that it was going to be a rehash of an earlier story given the initial introduction of the camera. I happy to say that I was wrong, and you have crafted 2 (IMHO) stories that I enjoyed. A good story should stand up without the sex. The sex just makes it interesting. ;-)
But what happed to Frank? Is he still in Fiji 2 years on?? There is a lot more in this tale that needs to be told. Does Frank come home to find George buried in Carla's ass, shoots him, goes to jail leaving Carla and Kristen??
Your story needs an ending to resolve the marriage between Carla and Frank.
I was interrupted by life while doing the story on Carla. Enough time had passed that I thought it was okay to drop it and move on to another story. Enough of you good people have written asking that I continue or bring it to a conclusion, so that will be what I attempt to do. Thanks for your interest.
I read this story because I enjoyed "Hobby" so much. I see from you last update that it has been awhile. I also read you comment about life sometimes gets in the way of.........stuff. Please finish the Story, I really enjoy your writing. Oh Yeah... don't stop with "Hobbies" either. I guess I'm greedy...
Thanks Again for a couple of well written, thought out pieces..
Too well written not to have a proper conclusion. looking forward to reading more.
I do hope this is not the end.Well written and watching for more.
Hi im really enjoying the sexual awakening of carla and her george. This is almost as good as "Hobby", i cant wait for the next installment.
Wow, loved this series but you stopped! I hope you are planning to come back to this soon.
When can we expect to see chapters 9, 10 and more??????
Please start writing more as there is sill a heck of a lot that can be written on thi storry.....
Myassisdragin
that this has been abandoned...I was soooo looking forward to the completion. Ah well, thanks for what you did do as it gave me much pleasure.
DM
I know that "George" is getting all he can handle (and more) in his Hobby days; however I have to echo the other reviewers in our disappointment that you left this version of one of my all time favorite leading men (and women!) without a 'happy ending' ;-)
In any case this will go into my Favorites folder, along with 'Hobby', with my thanks.
Jason
i sure hope you aren't going to leave it like this. bummer !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!