All Comments on 'Remodeling Carla'

by GeorgeDaBuilder

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AlexandraAlexandraover 14 years ago
Great writing

Wonderful fantasy within a fantasy. You even held back on "real sex" as ex-Pres Clinton would define it. This was a great story written by someone who understands that the art of seduction and a wonderful release comes with a great build up. Thanks George! Now where's my razor...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Kudos GDB

Quite an inaugural piece of work sir! Superlative in every way. Looking forward w/ anticipation to either the continuation of this story and/or another story.

trysttrystover 14 years ago
Fine!

Hope this is continued - and very soon, at that. Well written, well plotted. Believable characters, and sexy as hell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
only one flaw

Nobody could have stopped and left at that point!

Fan Fucking Tastic!

Jason

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nicely done!

Yeh. Believable enough & sexy as anything. Just the opposite of POTUS - only saying.

Anonymous
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