All Comments on 'Remote Control'

Piss poor.

"Sound" is CAPITALIZED. It is a place.

You can do a better job of writing dialogue.

The YOU ME is shameful and tacky.

Still struggling to give you one star.

Yes, a few errors with the grammer. A good editor can help you with that. I loved the story A sexy date night with the wife is what I like to read. No infidelity is a great touch as well. Keep on writing and everything will fall into place