All Comments on 'Rendezvous with Darkness Ch. 01'

Highly erotic and well thought out. Your world is believable and consistent, and your characters are well defined. Looking forward to it heating up in the next chapter.

A great premise and a great story. The characters are very believable and so is the technology. I would have gone with 2 eggs instead of 4, but that's just me. haha

I'm loving it already!

More, please!

i like this story. it would be great to see what happens next