All Comments on 'Renee's Fantasy'

The writing was a bit awkward at the start, but then it flowed beautifully. Thank you for the sexy story!

It got nice & raunchy toward the end, but there were a few things wrong...

In particular, please check the spellings of people's names - Brian may like to be called 'Brain', but it wouldn't be on his birth certificate! I also found a couple of switches between first-person & third-person narration - can be a little jarring at times.

All in all, though, I did enjoy it - I'll be keeping an eye out for more :)

Makes me want to get that awsome treatment..... made me wanna cream....

This was awesome...I felt like I was there. Right when you began coming all over her tits, lips and face, I came, as well. Oh, God, what a great story to jack off to...absolutely fantastic!