All Comments on 'Rent-A-Daughter'

Could a series develop?

Brother catch them and join in .

This was amazing! I've been reading stories here for YEARS, and I even recently started writing a few myself. But this one is one of the most original premises I've ever seen. Incredibly well done! I literally laughed out loud when she said, "This isn't what it looks like!" Because what the fuck else can you say?! I positively loved it!

You certainly deliver quality. I've been following you since I read Women's Studies; I am deeply impressed with your work. Keep it up!

Great story, good as a one off or good if you continued. Excellent work.

Please give us more. This has the potential to be a great series.

Have to be honest, you are one of the few I actually follow. I love the way you write, so descriptive and full of, well everything, passion, emotion, drama....

This is a great story. I'm looking forward to whatever is next.

I liked it all, the plot the set the interactions. Will be adding you to my faves list.

There is absolutely no need to tell you again, what a great writer you are!

This was the most original incest story I think I have ever read. I hope you are planning a second chapter.

I loved that!

Consistently great...

I would love to hear about your other clients

This story is so F'in Hot my phone almost caught fire! Five Stars from this old reader. Very well done.

I would like to take a second to thank all of you who commented, or emailed me to tell me how much you enjoyed this story. As it stands, there are no plans for a sequel. While writing the story I'd tried to think of where it could go from there, and everything i thought of seemed too cliched or over done. Besides, Sam has already reached the mountain top. she has finally fulfilled her daddy daughter fantasy. Sure I could tell you about all of there other little adventures, but if I was to continue Sam's story, I would much rather start from the beginning and maybe go a little more in depth about her origins, and explore some of her relationships with her clients.

TLDR: No sequels, but very likely a prequel or two sometime down the road.

You guys are awesome.

SoB_Erotica

mmm very hot. i love the development. I will be coming back to reread it again later.

awesome

...and you're one of my favorite Favorites.

You have a wonderfully vivid imagination about family affairs! Gonna edge myself for hours reading this story

Very nicely written, and lots of Spice.

This was the hottest story I have ever read

Fun story. Well done!

Excitedly hot

The best story I have read! BTW it is good with your little sister to, she has a great mouth, and she likes it anal too. But I could see what you were doing just like I was there. A well written story, I wish I could read more of you family affair!!

That was Great! Thank you!

Great story. Keep up,(no pun intended), the good work. More stories. Yah!!

Add father doing anal with daughter and son finding mommy in compromising position and taking her pussy and ass in the next story!

This was sheer entertainment.

Damn, you're good!

Just fantastic, thank you.

This was, without a doubt, one of the hottest stories I have ever read. I had to stop SEVERAL times to take care of the effect this had on me. I will be spending most of my free time over the next several days reading the rest of your stories. Thanks.

Fantastic!

I thoroughly enjoyed this! The set up was wonderful and so upbeat. It was a bit puzzling to find her first attack against her daddy over the car keys ending with him giving in so easily. She seemed so shallow, but the switch car scene made that a great, surprising transition! Your narrative skills are terrific.

My writings aren't anywhere as masterful as this. I will be studiously reviewing how well your words flow together in hopes of improving my own tales on Lit.

Scorching hot - wow!

This is so well written and so damned hot. Thx. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

i have read almost all of your stories .... they are the best that i have ever read ... i just wished they would never end .... i love your writing style, from start to finish

i would love to see this one continue, with the brother and also about her adventures with her other daddies

I hope you will make a sequel! This is a longtime fav of many.

A soon-to-be classic! When daddy/mummy and dad/mum collides.

Innovative, extremely well-written and very believable. Truly inspiring work.

Hoo, boy ! An absolutely priceless piece of story telling. It also helps to guild the lily that you are able to string a cohesive sentience in text book king's english. BRAVO and keep 'em coming . . . .

I know you wrote this a while ago, it's just GREAT! I keep coming back to it.

Thank you

Great story

I smiled when her 18 years old brother pleaded to be allowed a glass of wine during a family dinner. I live in Québec, where the loosely enforced legal drinking age of 18 is almost never enforced at family dinners. We usualy take our first drink of wine or beer before we're 15. I came home drunk for the first time at 17, my parents didn't ground me or anything.