All Comments on 'Rent Money'

by Quixerotic1

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LiterKnightLiterKnightover 4 years ago

I feel like it would be cool if there were a sequel (even if it’s just short) that has Victoria get a friend to bartend the next event, and perhaps get him to join as well. Plus, it might be fun to see what Victoria would get up to during the event, herself.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 4 years ago
I exciting and fun

Thank you, I loved your story; it was very creative and we'll written. I would very much like to see another chapter about Victoria and Andy. I think how Victoria's life would be an interesting topic .. is it permanent? if so, can she now lead a normal and rewarding life as a woman? can she participate in the group fun time activities if she wants to while having a personal life? is she really a trans woman who finally feels comfortable unlike her last life as a guy just sliding through life unfulfilled and unhappy? I know that I would be estatically happy like Victoria seems finally in the right body. TG Tiffany

BrendaNWBrendaNWalmost 4 years ago
Very enticing and hot

I would accept what happened to Victoria in a second without a moment of hesitation.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 3 years ago

Wonderful story, with a nice twist to the transforming-roomie theme.

I was particularly amused with Andrew telling Victoria she could call him Andy.

Thanks

Cora93Cora93over 3 years ago
More please

I'd love to read more of this and see how Victoria interacts with the world in her new body, great work

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I have always enjoyed a particular type of erotica, the kind that focuses on our own base desires overcoming our sense of reason or decorum. Through fantasy or far flung science, my characters explore their sexuality's limits, often with transformative results. For everyth...