All Comments on 'Repercussions Pt. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

I love your writing style and this story so far. Where's part two?! :-)

Pixiehoff almost 5 years ago

Impressive

An impressive story, well-told, which pulls one in. Looking forward to more.

nthusiastic almost 5 years ago

I'm Impressed by Your Attention to Historical Accuracy

Few people realize split crotch underthings did not start with Victoria's Secrets. They've been around hundreds of years. So now you know why the French dance, the Cancan was so scandalous; lifting their skirts displayed way more than just their panties. So the next time you see the cancan danced, imagine those French bloomers split, and that dance takes on a whole new look!

wheels0132 about 4 years ago

Artistic Merit!

Love the art, the slow build up, the attention to detail of the period. What a wonderful intro to this story. Looking forward to the next chapters!!

sissygirlErica17 almost 2 years ago

A very well written and erotic story. Well done !

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