All Comments on 'Reporter's Notebook'

I thought the imagination and plot develpment were certainly there. My only criticism waws that I thought the conversation between the two seemed forced and stiff. I have seen that alot with stories on this site. The writing is good until there is a conversation to be written down. I would get an editor to help you and then you'll be fine. It's always nice to read an interracial story.

It's definitely steamy here in front of my computer. You're a fabulous author! Keep up the good work!

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Oh! I love Black athletes, and I love the way you wove this story. Very sensual, steamy :)

Pretty <blushing> Whitegirl

I really enjoyed this story. It make me think of how exciting it would be to hear about Erin Andrews doing something like this with a black athlete also. I myself love the Interracial Lifestyle and have been involved with black men for more than 18 years now so it's always exciting to read IR erotica. I've read some of your other stories also and I must say, the other stories were great also. Hopefully you will continue to write others, especially about white women with black men...

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