All Comments on 'Repressed Desires'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This was interesting

A few mistakes here and there but generally a good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not bad

Enjoyable. A sequel could be interesting. I thought mom made stew not soup?

2 stars

DragonRider55

falcon69wlfalcon69wlover 5 years ago
Not bad

Not bad for a first effort... I liked it and look forward to a continuation of this one or all new ones.. I agree you could use an "editor" or edit it yourself before posting.

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