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sleepyestbearsleepyestbearabout 18 years ago
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There must be more, you cannot leave these two like this. The story was excellent with only one fault, it was too short! More, I demand more of them. Please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great Story!

Yes, please write more. Another chapter is needed. What happens next? What happens when he returns from Seattle? Great piece of writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great story

Great story loved the use of the condom. Another chapter or another story would be great to read.

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