All Comments on 'Rescue Ch. 01'

Hello, Literotica Reader!

This series, by far, has been the most popular of the stories I've read. It seems I've touched a nerve with those of us that are absolutely in lust with the Asian female form.

Chou is based on a very lovely woman I know from Lit and other chatrooms. She knows who she is and she appreciates the idea!

Please leave your comments and let me know how you liked my story! A writer improves with practice and feedback, so your thoughts are very much invited.

Pyro

nice job,as i said story and passion well mixed

cant get any better!!!!

but what happens next?

totally love the details.i'm female,so the biggest part of my arousal is mental,you touched many of my hot spots with your words.can't wait to read more of this hot couple.because i'm a girl,i like that he cares about her,and it's not all fuck and run.thanks,gem

Love the story, but I am most pissed at you. You don't know jack shit about the dangers of running a gas of diesel generator indoors. CO2 is a silent killer and that is the output of fuel powered generators.

I would normally put this in feedback but it is a good lesson for us all to remember

Absolutely delicious!! ....of course you had my undevided attention when I saw asian woman mentioned in the description! There is nothing that gets my hormones pumping like a short, thin asian girl! The shorter the better!! I love all flavors too, they all have their own charms and appeals :). Japanese, Korean, Chinese, Vietnamese and on and on!

...anyway I'm really enjoying the story so far! I couldn't figure her out either, jilling off like crazy over him but her clockspring getting all bent when he got too close. Reminds me of when I started dating my wife, she was really into me, but the first time our petting got a bit too heavy it was like she had a breakdown and started crying her eyes out. Freaked me out, lol! Turns out her last bf a number of years previously had shown up at her place drunk and wasnt taking no for an answer and basically raped her. ...always nice to know what you're walking into in a new relationship, lol! She was actually surprised that I didn't bail on the crazy woman, heh. If I ever meet the guy I'm going to mess him up, talk a out an uphill battle getting her head semi straight... I love my girl, but sometimes I think I would have been better off with my previous always horny gf instead if the constant intimacy challenged gf. :/

A very unique concept. I enjoyed this chapter, and will read the other two next.