All Comments on 'Rescued'

Two years later and you don't consider Donnie to be yours and Nikki's first child?

Thank you

See previous comment. Also seemed rushed after all the details given up to that point.

Great story, the ending was too short but ok as it was a happily ever after ending. 5 stars

rushed ending sort of like my comment five

I loved it....... but the ending was too short

Maybe Bill's trial?

John asking .Nikki's dad for her hand?

John and Nikki's wedding?

The adoption of Donnie by John ..... It would not be "our first child." its would be our first girl?

The rest of the story was truly great.

He basically begs her to stay then several paragraphs later.... "No woman wanted a weakling". Uh big contradiction there. Story was good up until the accident then the MC turns into super wimp for some reason?

Wait, she walks out on him after everything he did for her and then he just takes her back, no questions when she shows up on his door step? Wow, this guy is a total sap. Not saying they couldn't have worked out out but he just bends over like that? Future cuck in the making.

I liked the story but I don't think I would have taken Bill's seconds after she left. That would be kind of a deal breaker for me. What hadn't Bill already done to prove himself an asshole?

Blowing the bird back to life? You really had to go there? Soo corny, sometimes authors just take it too far.

2021 and he has titty mags huh? Is the MC 94 years old or something?

By the time the sex started I didn't really care and skipped it. I agree with someone below: MC was overly corny. The ending was totally rushed. The unsatisfactory ending kinda left me regretful for reading (almost) the whole story.

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I cannot understand why writers include "End" at the already very obvious end of the story. It's unnecessary and annoying.

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I want to criticize Nikki for staying with, then going back to, her abusive partner for the misguided notion it's in the best interest of her child, but I've seen it play out too many times in real life. That's the most realistic part of the story. Three

stars.

Sorry but I'm with anon from a year ago. Why's he taking back billy's literal sloppy seconds? She's a brainless idiot who will fall for any asshole aggressive enough to slap her around, and an awful "mother". He deserves a decent woman who will give him kids of his own, not bill's castoffs.

I liked it

It takes time to recover from an abuser once they have their hooks in you

Didn't get past page 1 where you used the MC's friend to virtue signal for the MC. "What an ass, I don't know why I was friends with him"? That's just lazy sentiment building. Also, "the bird healer"? Yeah page 1 sure is full of it