by no1specific
You should be a published author. This was a fantastic story.
The timeline was a little difficult to follow unless you just went on a little. Us old folks understand how time does not necessarily move along coherently.
detroitdave
Your story would be a great hollyweird movie. They pump only trash out now, so maybe it could be made by hallmark. Five stars! Semper Fi
Awesome story! Similar to one of my favourite stories by Fredrick Forsyth, the Shepherd.
Got lost in the jumping around in the beginning. I assume you were jumping in time, but it was all too confusing.
Oh, nice !
Beautifully timed, vocals just right and a bloody good tale, to boot.
Thank You
I have no idea what the fuck this story is about
This one has "Bolo" written all over it. And a damned fine choice it was.
Five stars, and if Harry in Va was a Navy man, he must have been an extraordinarily stupid one.
Sir. you have just joined the very exclusive ranks here who are, in my opinion, the very best in LW-the likes of DTiverson, Todd172, Saddletramp, Kate, Black Randy, etc. Their commonality is the ability to craft remarkable, intricate, BELIEVABLE plots as well as chracters that most can relate to, even identify with. This story, and the one before it, are amazing.
Please continue your amazing work!