by HenryDelta
great start, setting the scene, wonderful seduction, followed by great description
Cheers,
Menderman
first of all this story was so good, i came too many times to count, it was crazy.
second of all, the anonymous who gave a 50 is a fucking dumbass. not an editing mishap.
clearly it says this "With that, Jeannie lay back and stretched, clad only in her white thong panties......Julie's red G-string panty was rapidly darkening with her wetness as she anticipated what would happen next." do you see that dumbass, reread before you say stupid shit imbecile.
I enjoyed the way the story gradually built up from the beginning. Nice pace. Very seductive. I got really wet just from reading it. Good job!!!
That was good ! It so amazing how I missed this , more than a 5 babe. I was wet after reading this too