All Comments on 'Rescuing Rhonda'

they seem like an interesting group.

All of us men could have used this kind of reward in life. Please keep this going, It has many possibilites.

Loved it, just wish I had met someone as hot as her when I was his age!!! Don't stop this could be a great series.

As usual, I love your story Alex. Always a thrill when I see you've written a new one.

Nice lead-up to more, I hope! I only hope he can keep up with two gorgious ladies. When is the next part going to be posted? Soon will be to late. Thanks for the read.

I sure hope there is more. I came so good, that it is nap time now. Rhonda sounds like me and my girlfriend, with her young stud.

Kelli

It was erotic. It was believable. The one little glitch was that you erroneously used Cheryl for Ramona when the doorbell rang.

The whole older/younger, experienced/rookie dynamics work very well in this - on the Mrs. Robinson scale, I'd rate this an 11!

About as realistic as a Barbie doll, but still fun and sexy. Good read for a slow Saturday morning, and a nice touch with the detailed description by Jerry of his feelings as he thrusts in and out.

Lots of fun and you captured the boy's reactions real well.

Nice to have some erotica you can just enjoy and not have to read the hidden message. Keep it up! xx

Alex,

I just love your excellent approach to writing Dialogue.

I really liked this one right up till Rhonda invited Cheryl to the party without asking Jerry first. I thought Jerry and Rhonda had a good emotional connection, not to mention a history of knowing each other. Adding Cheryl to this felt to me like an intrusion.

Wasn't it Elvis that said. "You came never bring a friend into your Love Affair:. Sounds good to me.

***** That's what is called a just reward with a bonus at the end!! Thanks for sharing.