All Comments on 'Respite'

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chytownchytownabout 2 years ago

*****What a beautiful read so warm so sexy. Very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I often cum back to this five star story that’s so well told. How it starts, her raising her hips, her “unruly curls of unattended bush,” through both their multiple orgasms to their compatibility.

Yes, she buys the apartment yet do they ever fuck again. Ah, the mystery . . .

Justaman46Justaman46almost 5 years ago
The Needs of the woman

Excellent story about the needs of the woman vs the needs of the man.

anubeloreanubeloreabout 9 years ago
disabled person

Person (that's) disabled. Irish person. Person (that's) Irish. Colored person. Person (of)(that's) color(ed) I could do this all day. Stupidity is stupidity, even in the service of politically correct speech mechanisms. And quibbling about word order, when the end meaning is identical to sane persons...is the very essence of insane stupidity. I am a partially disabled person. I'm also a person who is partially disabled. Fuck off if you've got a problem with my apathy regarding which order I place those words in. I mean it. Bugger off, you pompous boor.

I'll read the rest of the story now, lol. ;-)

-Anubelore

OleguyOleguyalmost 10 years ago
One gap for me.

Did she buy the apartment?

That was a 5* ripper.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
enjoyable

A good read. Thank you! I hope more chapters follow soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nice little story

but it needs a follow up as to what happened to them....

CaliforniaWino92CaliforniaWino92over 10 years ago
Waiting on the Sequal

I thought this was a very good story and well told. As a real state agent myself, I certainly enjoyed the multiple risks being taken. Would love to see the story develop as the couple (I like older women as well) as well as the estate agent exploits - two different directions that could be wound into one. Then there is the 18 year old daughter...who knows where your imagination can take this story line, but I'll be back to find out

dinkymacdinkymacover 10 years ago
Nice!!

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Beautiful

I love the slow build, the little expressions of desire before they finally go for it. I love, especially, your description of the kiss. Absolutely perfect.

Zach_lost_in_AusZach_lost_in_Ausover 10 years ago
Superb

Beautifully expressed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Amazing

sparktjsparktjover 10 years ago

Superb story, well written. More please. Agree with last comment about Aus English being superior to US English, and I lived in the US for 4yrs so you'd think I'd be used to it! I love 'em really. Please keep writing.

paulalan123paulalan123over 10 years ago
Great Job!

Pacing and back story made for a very enjoyable read. Left me wanting to know what came next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
very nice

I really enjoyed the very touching build-up. But it ended too abruptly for me. Wish it had been just a bit longer, with a hint of more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Gr8 writing

Keep up the good work.

MitchFraellMitchFraellover 10 years ago
Thanks, very well written.

I enjoyed this story. It shows an aspect away from the usual line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Quite Good Story

At least the english we Brits get on here is much better from down under than the english we get from the other side of the pond.

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