All Comments on 'Rest Stop'

The best fantasy should have some plausibility. This has none.

Fucking rubbish by A Wanker

I liked it. Where's part 2?

To fucking short. Limp noodle is harder then what my rock got. Totally waste of my time reading this. I can dream better crap than this.

do they parents know the kids are fucking?how long have they been doing it?it feels like we missed some of the story.if A WANKER is going to post that to every story here then stop reading.

with mafia_patriarch,

need some semblance of reality in it,parents gone, sis asleep, so he just starts wanking in van,won't get out to have a piss but wanking with sis next to him no probs

Loved the way you caught the nature of two loving quirky parents...I can remember traveling like that...watching the two of them together...to bad I had a brother with me instead of a HOT sister. The sex was short, but you can make up for it with a chapter 2...and more!!!!!!!!!

Keep it coming awesome job

You rushed the story made it seem like they had been having sex forever

very poorly written an way too rushed, this should be chapter two of four and needs to be three times longer. no background or character development to tell if this was the first time or not and no end. if you write for yourself thats fine JUST DON'T POST IT. if you write for the readers start at the beginning and move forward. ALL stories need a beginning a middle and an end plus a GOOD EDITOR, all we got here was a sloppy middle.

needs to have more fuckingCCEC

prett good

I cant wait to read the next installment of this story 5 stars

Good but way too rushed.

Despite the fact that it ended too quickly, i couldn't help but find it extremely sexy. I would love to read more about these two. 5 star

Short, to the point, great for getting off quickly.

Loved it!! And so funny... Holy Hell!! Smells like a Mexican Whorehouse in here.

Very nice style!