by Savage Ron
to say the least, i don't normally read on this subject but you do write very well and i enjoyed the story. Best wishes with your writing. naynay
More please.
Very good, well written, not only can I visualize this, I can almost feel it. Thank you!!
Can't wait for more....
Could almost taste the blood in my mouth. Now get out of my head and quit stealing my fantasies. LoL!
PS...I'm on Myspace as DeviL's PlayThing. Great story. Let me know when you write more.
Oh my god, Ron. That was intensely hot. I am at a loss for words. I think I need a shower... ~W
hey you ... darn awesome just love it its just what i can sink my teeth into ... keep it coming and hey do publish its good ....
Soulless
This story definitely needs to be continued.Its awesome and leaves me only wanting more.Someone needs to publish this talented, beautiful writer :0
Absolutely WONDERFUL. I really loved this one. It was sensual and erotic without lacking in beauty. Very nice.