All Comments on 'Restroom Rendezvous'

You have a very nice writng style. I enjoyed your story.

I DONT READ MANY OF THIS TYPE OF STORY BUT I MUST SAY YOU ADDED A REAL THRILL TO THIS ONE AND I LOVED THE WAY IT WAS WRITTEN THANKS FOR A GREAT STORY. "JAKK"

Not your best work? Then I must read your other stories. I found myself thoroughly engrossed in the story. However, I would have thought you character's dominant side would have shown through more clearly.