All Comments on 'Retail Isn't So Bad After All'

I thought it was really good. I liked it. ;)

was ok, bit unrealistic about 9 and a half inches, and the name Janessa just irritated me.. I know these are silly superficial reasons not to be impressed with the story, but it also lacked detail and real sensuality. Maybe next time try slow it down a little, make it more descriptive.

I share a name with the main character...so i approve. Also it was good.